Later on in the show during the time where Jake a Ryan are dealing with the drug addict. The drug addict has blood, cuts and sores all over his face this would be using make-up and costume.This shows us that he has not been living a nice life, where he has been hurt.
Mark 2 and a half out of 5
ReplyDelete1. To get the T mark (for identifying terminology) you should identify establishing shot, bird's eye view shot. This shot reveals to the audience where the tv programme (NOT 'SHOW') is set and WHAT KIND of a place the setting is: instantly recognizable, Brighton is a challenging police territory as it is not just huge but also such a diverse mix: a university town, a seaside day tripper's town, a draw for foreign tourists, a shopper's paradise and so on.
2. Brighton is not 'brightly lit'. You can say this about a single setting but not about this lengthy shot that covers so much ground.
2. More precise on the drug addict, Nathan. Avoid vague terms like 'not been living a nice life'. Write instead, his wild eyes, shaking hands and scarred arms construct him as a drug addict and the disheveled hair and clothes show him to be a drop-out as does the chaos of his room with empty alcohol bottles. No need to refer to make-up and costume. Write about the characters as you see them.